Things to work on.
Write more onto the analysis of the panting, for example what the painting is tell you and your interpretation of what you see in the painting.
Write an introduction and thesis statement to this essay.
Explain the things that you see in the essay that tell your readers are significant and let the readers see more of what you are thinking and how you came to those concussions.
Always include evidence to back up what you are saying.
Make sure to write introduction and thesis statement to this essay.