Hi there
this an essay in English course.
the tutor asked me to improve this paper to be more critical and analytical.
– i upload some files for you, important to have look on them please
peer in mind some points will ease your work:
-the structure of this essay is “introduction-problem-solution-evaluation-conclusion” without subheadings, so i need it linked between paragraphs.
-the evaluation should have some literature and statics with references
-my tutor has made a lot of comments, it is very important to go through them and i upload 6 images for you.
