Continuation/Revision of the Order. The following sections needs revising (see comments):
3.1 Macro Environment: You actually need to conduct an analysis of the macro environment, not just describe what one is. Refer to the requires in the template.
3.5 Customer Analysis: needs to be revised. review description in template.
4.8 Branding: does not meet the requirements. Review the description in the template. Then include logo, colors, slogan, etc.